Nowadays, people pay attention so much about cosmetic appearance and regard them as a fundamental criterion in life’s career rather than focusing on vital behavior such as being loyal, aiding poor people and etc and it’s dramatically increased and being widespread in last decade. Generally speaking, being careful about appearance has validity, but some disadvantages may occur in their life.
It stand to reason that in contemporary cities citizens are enthusiastic about be more handsome and eager to be updated in every single subject such as clothing trends or hairstyles. From my point of view, focusing on appearance a lot is creeping into every kind of person’s lifetime and also being so typical these days and it turns to a massive global competition specially among women. Indeed, lack of self confidence is being a principal key factor related to this situation. Furthermore, some disease for instance speckle or big nose lead them to take risk about surgery and put up a new one.
Consequently, these sorts of circumstances give a rise to a negative impact on their healthcare. Going under the surface, being too extravagance cause a harmful effect either on life satisfaction or youths behavior. In addition, people get enraptured about fashion designers and as a result it puts a strain on to have a normal life and have a detrimental effect on financial situation. Granted, focusing on physical appearance instead of internal one in order to get beautiful would have a fester effect and prone them to be perverted in trivial circumstances.
Overall, focusing on external appearance is something that should government has a responsibility about this issue. Deterioration of physical surgery has been felt surprisingly in 21th century and it looms to destructive effect on skin may have remain for the rest of the life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stands'?
Suggestion: stands
...vantages may occur in their life. It stand to reason that in contemporary cities c...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
... to destructive effect on skin may have remain for the rest of the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24496644295 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06491226976 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61744966443 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1640860424 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180857886547 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626634320659 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322960532409 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108490595402 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346466824476 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.