People spend large amounts of time and money on clothes, hairstyles and make up to change their appearance.
Is it important for people to be concerned about the way they look? What are the consequences of focussing on physical appearance?
Fashion has been a part of people’s life for very a long time. Most of the time, it needs some money to get the right mix and matches for one’s preference. Some people believe that it is a waste to spend on appearance, and people should focus more on person’s value. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of the spending on external look.
Fashion is a way to express oneself into a form of appearance. It is a personal right to do whatever a person want on one’s own body. Buying a new set of clothes could make the buyer feel refreshed. Changing to hairstyle could result in relaxing. Wearing the right make up could result in confidence. Furthermore, appearance also plays an important part in job related communication such as an interview, or dealing with clients. Therefore, it is undeniable that improving appearance might be considered as an investment.
In contrast, fashion costs a money. High-end brands usually cost five to ten times more expensive than the average market. Spending too much money without a good source of income could severely damage a cash flow. In addition, a kid should not spend lot of money with this if it comes from parent’s wallet. On the other hand, focusing on appearance without considering the actual value could cause a problem later. For example, an applicant who passes an interview because of appearance might not perform well at work, a deal that is closed because of a salesperson appearance might not work as expected.
Despite the fact that appearance costs some amount of money, I think that appearance as a way to express personal feeling is good and causes no harm if money is spend with caution. However, focusing on appearance and overlooking the other values should be avoided.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
...vestment. In contrast, fashion costs a money. High-end brands usually cost five to t...
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... is good and causes no harm if money is spend with caution. However, focusing on appe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in addition, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81819485171 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1047318799 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4736842105 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252142579629 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071013585623 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426923709538 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151326181647 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416938699501 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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