Holidays are important for everyone. For a salary person, the holiday quota is provisioned by an employer with minimum requirement by law. For self-employed people, they can stop whenever they want by trading-off their income. For a decade, there has been a stronger trend for excitement activities and weaker for relaxing travel. In my perception, I do not believe that the trend represents the whole population and other kinds of holiday should not be ignored.
Some people look for adrenaline rushing activities for their holiday. They search for amusement park with a roller coaster, a beach with parasailing, or mountain climbing. These activities are fun and exciting and best fits for people at young age. Although the activities are more expensive than relaxing places, travelers traded that off with their ordinary accommodation.
On the other hand, some people still look for a non adventurous trip such as a quiet retreat on a silent beach or fun shopping experience in a shopping district in their favorite country. They might find it more suitable for themselves than a risky activities. Furthermore, they might have small children who are not physically ready for those activities.
In conclusion, people spend their holiday differently on their own way cause they have their own preference and limitations. I do not believe that a single trend will be able to overtake other kinds of activities and people will seek a new way to spend holiday in more memorable way to make sure that their needs are met.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... they want by trading-off their income. For a decade, there has been a stronger tre...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
...re suitable for themselves than a risky activities. Furthermore, they might have small chi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, still, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.112 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84040560484 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1196061768 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181817815804 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738789386247 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440408925432 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118251972837 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425537907379 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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