People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.
It is thought that raising the cost of fuel for private vehicles including cars and motorbikes is the most effective solution to tackle the degradable environment. My view is that there are other workable measures that can solve this problem.
On the one hand, if authorities increased the price of fuel, it would address environmental issues. Firstly, in terms of private means, the drivers will consider the high cost to reach the destination, so they will transform to use the public transportation to save money. For example, students, who study at the universities in Vietnam, often opt for buses as the major means to go to school. Secondly, regarding freight services, to cut down the expense, the companies would take account the shipping fee so that they can choose the railways for their delivery methods. Therefore, when the cost of fuel grows up, it will make the environment cleaner and greener.
On the other hand, the measure mentioned above is not the only solution to mitigate the air or noise pollution, so the government should adopt policies to be more feasible in the long term. The first policy is that the authorities should subsidize the cost of fares, which will encourage more people to use public transport system. The second way is that the cars must be prohibited driving into the city centers or drivers must pay for the congestion charge when moving to such those populated places. Finally, promoting the green campaigns to motivate the public to use environmentally friendly vehicles such as electric cars or motorbikes that would optimize environmental preservation.
In conclusion, raising the price of petrol is the possible solution to ease the pollution, however I believe that there would be three other effective measures that could solve this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11224489796 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7779955026 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568027210884 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0351515375 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287935789839 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957064881753 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529098652754 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170173527303 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734282063648 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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