People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.
It is inevitable that, most of individual say that, authorities should rise the expense of fuel for cars and other transportation to solve the issue of environment. According to me, environment can not polluted by just fuel because there are many other factor such as global warming, industries, deforestation and many more, so government should give attention on this factors instead of increase fuel.
To commence with, one of major point is government should focus on industrial waste which is produced by factories and other buildings. To be precise, as there are many harmful chemicals which produced by factories and smoke is spread in everywhere, humans suffer many hazardous issues in their life because of air pollution. Afterwards, if government should replace the factories rather than to improve fuel charges then they can easily reduce the environment problems. For example, authority give their entire focus on their problems than they can easily save their surroundings.
Moving further, the another point of this regard is, if government should enhance the price of fuel than people should use because of its convenience as cars and other vehicles are very helpful for people's life as if they should focus on deforestation then they can also save the environment because thesedays most of the humans prefer to cut the trees which give impact on environment authority should give some punishment on these people than public can live long and wild animal can also survive easily.
In conclusion, government not only focus on industrial waste for reduce the environment problem but also sometime people cannot leave to use vehicles because of it convenience. Government should also concentrate on deforestation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'factors'?
Suggestion: factors
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33576642336 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84630354499 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510948905109 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.789537145 49.4020404114 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.444444444 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4444444444 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324465483234 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135666766918 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709580641422 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209827650636 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598967734802 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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