In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. What might be this case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
There is no country in this world which is untouched by the phenomenon of buying houses in cities. Some people do not like renting homes because of higher monthly rent and inconvenience to make changes.I firmly believe that having your own property is always better than renting one.
In today's world, many people hesitate to rent a home in big cities. They believe that in order to hire a modern apartment, they need to pay a hefty amount as deposit, and it is not a long term investment either. Sometimes, the tenants are forced to pay a higher tariff to their landlord due to tax issues. Besides, the monthly apartment tariff can vary in many metropolitan cities, according to the real estate market conditions. To give an ideal example, in the UK, especially in London house rent is a nightmare for many people. Moreover, in a hired property, we have some limitations to make changes and decorations as per our wish. We always need to follow the strict rules of the landlord to stay there.
While owning a residence in cities has many advantages. Recent studies indicate that it is only likely to accentuate in the coming decades considering the ground realities of the modern world. Firstly
, it is a solid investment for a family to buy a flat or apartment in cities or villages. Instead of paying monthly payment, they can use that money for the mortgage, renovation and redecoration of their own residence. Secondly, the owner of the property will get complete freedom to make any changes and modifications.For example, landscaping of the garden, modulation of a kitchen, and refurbishing bedrooms according to one's desire.In addition, unlike rented dwellings, we get the privacy to keep pets and organise parties in our buildings.
To conclude, while it can be argued that too much emphasis is placed on the drawbacks of rented accommodation, my own opinion is that it is always a good idea to invest money to acquire a home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88217522659 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83329846651 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580060422961 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5734723655 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.733333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186690975511 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547367293893 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629325659146 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105719145392 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793198787808 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.