Some people believe that earning a home is one of the greatest achievements in life however others disagree and think that it is a better to rent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Home is the basic necessity of every human being. Many believe that being a landlord is better while other opine that renting has more benefits. This essay will discuss about these views and explain why leasing is the ideal choice.
There are several reasons why buying real estate is considered wise. To begin with, having a property on one's name brings a peace of mind to the family. It ensures that they will always have shelter on their heads which will keep them safe. For example, the senior citizens today push their children to buy homes so that they are stable in life. Furthermore, having a good property is always a good financial asset. This is because the value of land increases over time due to the demand-supply mismatch. Over time, investors have got great returns by putting their money into houses. Despite of these, renting still might be a wiser choice.
Leasing a place to live can turn out to be beneficial based on the following factors. Firstly, renting provides the flexibility to move based on changing needs and demand. If a current accommodation is not fullfilling the requirements of having a home that one desired, they can change their place comfortably. For instance, a lot of individuals shift themselves because of issues like a parking, electricity, safety, etc. Secondly, the loan installments are generally higher than the rent amount. The interest rates that banks charges make it a financially unhealthy to pay hefty EMIs as compared to just paying an affordable lease. All these reasons contribute to the factor that latter is an ideal choice.
To conclude, this essay has discussed the benefits of owning a property or living in it by paying rent. The benefits of leasing outweigh the benefits of owning and hence, one should prefer the latter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...To begin with, having a property on ones name brings a peace of mind to the famil...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'current accommodation'.
Suggestion: current accommodation
... based on changing needs and demand. If a current accommodation is not fullfilling the requirements of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94701986755 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58459776516 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62582781457 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9496583117 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.7 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130396806052 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036006384599 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414177102102 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914656625643 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501094950805 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.