The people think that the government should invest money in arts and cultural events, while others believe that government should spend money on more important things.discuss both side of view and give your opinion.
"Money is the worst discovery of human life, but, it is most trusted material to trust the human nature." Nevertheless, there are some issues which are irrevocably and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that; governor- agencies, should have to spend money for prominent things; art and traditiona or not? In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that authorities had been invested money on the tradition. It was being rose- up economy of nation, because, the numerous overseas tourist have visit in that era, and, paid the ticket amount of seen that event.In addition to this, An art and tradition is part and parcel of everyone life, so, government is responsible for making a wonderful art and cultural museum in the nation. The best epitome of this is, Amritsar is one accustom city of Punjab, they authorities have been already spent a plenty of money to preserve culture and art. This is best way to attract the numerous people onwards; Kalli a Neal a bagh, partition museum, and golden temple Amritsar, that always wonderful places in the world to preservation of art and cultural gallery.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who reveal that, the governor-agency could be spend minefields development of nation. It will providing lot of facility of people; hospital,school, and, so on, however, That is best suggestion to built a developed era, a good illustration of this is government have been responsible to construct a good roads and grown- up the poverty of own his country.moreover, The best epitome of this is the Hindustan time was conducted survey of all state of India a, but, realize that happens state government had been provided a numerous facility in the state and developed the era.
Nevertheless, weighing both the opinions, I reckon that there is no single conclusion still, I take this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands the administration have been responsible for development of cities, and, should have also prevent the museum of art gallery and tradition for seeing that new- generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, as to, for instance, i reckon, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98360655738 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8853856151 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.474105101 49.4020404114 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.4 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189515615223 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823486442804 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500185330002 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109319074564 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460369464356 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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