As people travel around the world quickly and often, the spreading chance of viruses and diseases has increased. How can governments, organizations, and individuals prepare for the future outbreak and epidemic?
The spreading risk of viruses and diseases has risen significantly due to the quick movement of people on a large-scale. Therefore, governments, organizations, and individuals should have effective measures to prepare themselves.
On the one hand, governments and organizations should have ways to prevent the spread of the epidemic and to defend residents. Firstly, governments could enact necessary policies since they are nationwide. As an example, the Vietnamese government has suspended students from all schools to prevent the spread of coronavirus. Secondly, the information about the pandemic should be propagated widely so that the inhabitants could be aware of its danger. Besides, disseminating the ways to prevent the disease through text messages is an extremely effective way since every adult has a mobile phone. Finally, organizations could prepare for the outbreak by providing essential equipment such as face masks, anti-bacteria hand gel or simply, delaying the events that gather the crowd.
On the other hand, individuals are the ones that should have the sense of self-protection headforemost. Firstly, residents should always update the newest situation of the disease’s spread from mainstream newspapers. Secondly, they have to know how to prepare for the pandemic, storing the food for example, as well as how to protect themselves and others. In particular, since flu is a respiratory disease, wearing face masks, washing hands regularly or avoiding going to crowded places are indispensable things to do.
In summary, the regular movements of people all over the world have indeed contributed to the spread of diseases and viruses. Preparations, like decreeing necessary policies, providing aids or being conscious to protect yourself and others should be taken by governments, organizations, and individuals to prevent the spread of the epidemic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in particular, in summary, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65371024735 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20682621069 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4130000363 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232291357316 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774830636785 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056821889315 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143944763125 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311882011145 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.