People who live in busy cities are in many ways at a disadvantage to those who live in rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many people believe that living in the bustling city have a lot of drawbacks compared to countryside. In this essay, I will give my opinion and state reasons for the same. Firstly, I will discuss about the economic advantages of life in cities. Secondly, I will explore the aspects of social life in cities and rural areas.
To begin with, the developed towns have large factories and industries operating continuously and giving more opportunities of employment. For example, a person in urban area can opt out of any of the careers available he is interested in, whereas, people in villages have to do farming or animal husbandry for their living. Furthermore, the healthcare facilities and hospitals are in abundant in metropolitan cities. Thus, making people safer in terms of health and well-being. For example, In small villages, the bed’s availability in hospitals and health centers is extremely limited, also the number of waiting hours is too long as there is scarce of qualified doctors.
Humans in urban cities and suburbs have exciting and happening social life. As there are quite many hangout places and social centers for gatherings and meeting friends and family. Also, people in cities have many things to do during their week-off time. Whereas, for people living in rural areas the options are often limited due to no clubs and handful of social centers. In addition to that, the travelling is quite easy due to extremely good frequency of public transportation, also the time of travel is less due to better condition of roadways compared to rural villages.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree to the above-mentioned view. In my opinion, due to many reasons, people living in metropolitan cities are at huge advantage compared to those living in rural areas, People in rural areas manage to live with number of limitations in terms of infrastructure and employment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: of
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1064516129 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85170230483 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5090908063 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238535553059 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710919722732 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862563971035 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163167620923 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104025302311 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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