People will buy a product if it has quality or fulfil their needs. There is no need for advertisement.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is often argued that consumers purchase products due to their needs and advertisements are not necessary. I do not agree with the statement because the content and amount of advertisements that consumers exposed may affect their purchasing behaviour.
Advertisements are the main tools for brands to reach their target group in order to sell their products. Therefore, companies usually try to create ads according to their customer profile by finding what attracts their buyers the most. For example, if the car brand Renault’s new car aims to be sold to big families, the brand making a short TV commercial where a family of four using their very own product’s happily. According to the user experience departments of companies target advertising profits and successfully help companies to sell their products.
Additionally, since there are many options in the market in many different fields which being offered by varied brands, which of them sell the most depends on the number of ads the customers being exposed. For instance, if a new toothpaste brand comes to the market where many equivalences of this product already exist, if people see the new one on billboards, at the bus stop, and from Facebook advertisements, they would develop a tendency to buy the new one next time when they need a toothpaste. In psychology, this is called purchasing behaviour.
To conclude, although some people argue about how useless the advertisements is, I believe that advertisements are the most important tools in terms of selling a product. This is because by using the ads, brands can easily reach their target group and within the amount of the selling promotion they can affect the customer’s purchasing behaviour.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...there are many options in the market in many different fields which being offered by varied br...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20357142857 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96272549301 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560714285714 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1147662722 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.454545455 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219527962942 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865807463736 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629842419088 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134750850808 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555869495309 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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