The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.
Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
In western society the percentage of overweight children has increased in the last ten years by almost 20% .
Dirt this essay will talk about the cause of the overweight in the kids, followed by its effect on them l.
The percentage is going higher, and parents are not aware enough about their children. Even though Fast food is delicious, but we can’t let our sons and daughters be used to it . As a result this may cause them unhealthy body.
We should designate the meals that they will eat moreover we should interior them in any sport that they can get get a perfect physique.
The result of this could be fraught with danger, because this can cause them Obesity that can stop our offsprings having fun in there lives, and it might also cause them Diabetes in an early age.
To sum up we all must be aware letting them be active all the time preventing many deceases. We can also plant in them the will to refuse any detrimental food and have the full courage to reject it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, so, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 180.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56111111111 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28809707795 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9730248635 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150336568695 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834306771511 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115756833591 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112082133806 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130851677262 0.056905535591 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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