The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

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...e number of children who are overweight.This essay will discuss some reasons why thi...
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...the consequences of this worrying trend.The main cause of this problem is poor diet...
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...The food in these places has been proven to be very unhealthy, and much of the ad...
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...d much of the advertising is targeted at children, thus ensuring that they consti...
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... is not only due to eating out, but also the type of diet many children have at h...
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... have at home. A lot of food consumed is processed food, especially with regards ...
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...y with regards to ready-made meals which are a quick and easy option for parents ...
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...arge increase in health related diseases amongst children, especially diabetes. T...
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...betes. This debilitating illness means a child has to be injected with insulin fo...
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...r the rest of their life. Not only this, very overweight children often experienc...
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...experience bullying from other children, which may affect their mental health. Th...
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...tal health. The negative stigma of being overweight may also affect self-esteem. ...
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...re are several causes of obesity amongst children, and a variety of negative effe...
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...re several causes of obesity amongst children, and a variety of negative effects. Soc...
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...e effects. Society must ensure steps are taken to prevent this problem from deter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, thus, as to, for example, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40384615385 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.08661080362 2.80592935109 181% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588461538462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.751986724 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.076923077 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283448136346 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813172475719 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092393018806 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605711706876 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794431168805 0.056905535591 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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