A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this day and age, people are likely to consider the other based on their social status and personal wealth, meanwhile other traditional values including honor, kindness have been forgotten. From my point of view, I am partly in favour of this argument with some reasons below.
Teenagers nowadays value some famous celebrities as the more popular they become, the more respect they receive. It is easy to understand that people are living in the modern world, where social status plays a vital role in society. Taking Kim Kardashian as an example, netizens just take notice of what fancy cars or luxurious things she used through the reality show, so that her influence on the society is higher than the other. However, there are also a lot of famous people regconised by the way they contribute to the charitable society, so that the more they devote to, the more honor they will get.
On the other hand, traditional values also play a crucial role in the consideration process of some communities. For instance, various employers still judge potential applicants based on their hard-working attitude, positive behavior and also truthfulness. Moreover, nutritious businesses are looking for partners who can be reliable and dependable. Consequently, these worthy humanities should be taught to children by their parents as those still necessary in society. As those are going to benefit them in their later life.
Taking everything into consideration, people who hold higher values and possessions are usually paid attention to. In my opinion, I suppose that moral aspects can not be eliminated from our daily lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his argument with some reasons below. Teenagers nowadays value some famous cel...
^^^
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...low. Teenagers nowadays value some famous celebrities as the more popular they become, the mo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...here social status plays a vital role in society. Taking Kim Kardashian as an exa...
^^
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an example, netizens just take notice of what fancy cars or luxurious things she ...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ote to, the more honor they will get. On the other hand, traditional values al...
^^^
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... various employers still judge potential applicants based on their hard-working a...
^^
Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing attitude, positive behavior and also truthfulness. Moreover, nutritious busin...
^^
Line 5, column 474, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ts as those still necessary in society. As those are going to benefit them in thei...
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g to benefit them in their later life. Taking everything into consideration, pe...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, i suppose, by the way, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19771863118 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7242861763 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653992395437 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4713132477 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120777044781 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398299214672 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282481360804 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742243429736 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343096377391 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.