Some people believe using modern technology (digital photographs, blogs) is the best way to record and remember important personal events. Others think the traditional method (making photo albums, writing diaries) is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, numerous people adopt modern ways to capture their critical moments. Meanwhile, the other groups of people still prefer to use the traditional ways. In the following paragraph, both sides of this argument will be discussed with some reasons below.
On the one hand, a variety of citizens suppose that the digital versions have some specific benefits to meet the demand of satisfying their daily needs. With a huge data store and also fast traveling speed on the Internet, netizens can not only recall their memory of whatever they want but also easy to post on the Internet to share with people. Taking Apple and Samsung in a few years as an example, these international companies are tending to upgrade their camera and also bring more options in data to customers, especially people who are earning a living from social media.
On the other hand, people who do not curious about the click-through on social media, prefer to use the old method to memorize. From the perspective of handmade, those items can be decorated by our shelves, which demonstrate our characteristics to other people. It is easy to understand that the things equipped with the photos or the diary have a strong evoke about memories. As a result, the more photos and diaries are being yellow with ages, the more precious memories have been.
Taking everything into conclusion, various users believe that using technological things like digital photographs is the best way to store memorable events. From my point of view, I think that those of these ways both have pros and cons, and it also depends on a person’s interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, while, i think, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92363636364 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58319041638 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603636363636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3939035187 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.833333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207679706443 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743310436509 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509028779506 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130301342622 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712139759911 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.