A person spends most of his or her time in the workplace, and life becomes meaningless when there is no job satisfaction. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Job satisfaction irrefutably has a considerable bearing on individuals' physical and mental well-being. Given its profound impact, it is believed that the absence of job contentment could render life meaningless as people spend most of their time at work. Much as this thinking is valid on some level, I would contend that a person's life can still be meaningful despite being discontent with their job.
Job satisfaction can translate into meaning in people's lives. An individual that feels great job satisfaction tends to display a passionate commitment to their work and aspire to better performance in a bid to gain promotions. The sense of satisfaction earned from this advancement could make life more purposeful. By contrast, those deriving little satisfaction from their job tend to have no positivity or drive within them, which is bound to take a heavy toll on their mental and physical health. In particular, constant dissatisfaction may instill a sense of purposelessness, resulting in considerable stress, and in worst-case scenarios, some people may go through depression or commit suicide. This goes to show how a lack of job satisfaction might prove detrimental to one's life given the enormous amount of time one spends at work.
However, there exist other factors that can also give meaning to life in addition to job satisfaction. In spite of being dissatisfied with their employment, the income earned can provide people with the means necessary to lead a happy and abundant life. Finances aside, individuals take up an occupation as long as they can do good deeds to help others. For example, waiters, waitresses, or shippers, whose jobs are labor-intensive and repetitive, report low job contentment. Nevertheless, people still take on these jobs in order to ensure financial stability for their family as well as to make customers happy, which would bring them a great sense of purpose.
In conclusion, the notion that dissatisfaction with one's employment can make life no longer meaningful is valid to a certain extent, however, there are other contributing factors that both make a job worth doing and people's lives purposeful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Line 2, column 723, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lack of jobs'.
Suggestion: a lack of jobs
...r commit suicide. This goes to show how a lack of job satisfaction might prove detrimental to...
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Line 2, column 777, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...satisfaction might prove detrimental to ones life given the enormous amount of time ...
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Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...n, the notion that dissatisfaction with ones employment can make life no longer mean...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24057971014 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10857369444 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576811594203 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5329512878 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.533333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204111250772 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728460325005 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453230130555 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134603937251 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413657611215 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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