The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Two plans are shown, the first one is related to a student room for a pair of students and the second one is for a room with a single student. Generally, the room for two people is much larger and has more facilities than the room for a single student.
The student room for two people is 150 dollars per week more than the room for one individual, at 350 dollars a week. The room for two people has two beds with two study desks. The two student compartments are separated by two cupboards. Next to student desk one, located on the left hand side of the room, there is a book shelf and there is also a small window next to bed one. Apart from that, this room has a table and chairs for more convenience. Study desk 2 is located near to the kitchen, followed by another bed and window.
The student room for one person has only one bed, but it has much larger windows for a better view. It also has a study desk. Both rooms have attached bathrooms of the same size to the left of the door as you enter.Moreover, the kitchen area is also similarly equipped. Both rooms have a sink, a stove and a microwave for cooking,located to the right of the door. A television is also available in both rooms. The rent is paid weekly and it amounts to two hundred dollars for the room with one student and three hundred and fifty dollars for the room with two people.Lastly, both rooms have the same length of six meters, but their width is different. The room for two people has a width of four meters and the room for a single person has a width of only two and a half meters.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20930232558 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34232699127 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421926910299 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
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Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7037139208 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
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Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 110.0 5.01903807615 2192% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
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Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.180686304044 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130696450883 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.368577229443 0.151304729494 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577691007225 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.