At present the media affect people's lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development?
Media has impact on the way people live their lives. This essay suggests that media will affect lifestyle on the society and I believe it has negative development.
Media can cause people’s lifestyle change. That is to say that the changing of the people is caused by advertisement from media. The advertising forced people to buy their products. The advertising use the famous actors/actress to sell their products. The behavior’s actors / actress usually is followed by people. It has impact that people will buy products which is sold by media who use actors/actress to sell it. In different word, although the community do not need this products, when their idol sell it, they will buy it. For example, Based on survey in the year 2000, in Canada, selling of Compact Powder Cosmetic increased dramatically about 150 % in 3 days. It was happen when Isabella, the famous actress in Canada live broadcast in Oreo Programs share her experience use this product.
Media has negative development. It is clear that most of people will be influenced by media. The society will buy anything that sold using media. It makes people to be consumptive lifestyle especially children. The teenagers was influenced easier, so the present of adults is needed for them. For instance, survey to Indonesian parents in 2010 and 78 % said that their children forced them to buy products that was advertised in Television.
On conclusion, media has an impact to change people lifestyle and it has negative development to make people consumptive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is usually
...s. The behavior's actors / actress usually is followed by people. It has impact that ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ord, although the community do not need this products, when their idol sell it, they...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., when their idol sell it, they will buy it. For example, Based on survey in the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t Powder Cosmetic increased dramatically about 150 % in 3 days. It was happen whe...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...atically about 150 % in 3 days. It was happen when Isabella, the famous actress in Ca...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... negative development. It is clear that most of people will be influenced by media. The societ...
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Message: You should probably use: 'were'.
Suggestion: were
...tyle especially children. The teenagers was influenced easier, so the present of ad...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y to Indonesian parents in 2010 and 78 % said that their children forced them to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, for instance, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13147410359 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90235195097 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529880478088 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.093236359 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5555555556 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9444444444 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72222222222 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257418166164 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975636691271 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797419645057 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210447418218 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851666876385 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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