At present, science is developing quickly, but some people still have a high opinion of art. What can art tell us of life that science can not?
In this constantly-changing world, science plays a crucial role for everyone all over the world physically, mentally and socially. Apart from the much benefits of science and technology, it is undeniable that art is also one of the indispensable parts which affect significantly on society in terms of spiritual life. From my point of view, I totally agree that lots of people tend to appreciate the role of art in multi-aspects of life.
First of all, art seeks to please people with beauty. Indeed, people always realize that beauty still exists in every corner of the world no matter what how it changes. Therefore, art can function to take care of people’s spiritual life as well as refresh themselves. For example, in Eastern countries like England, Germany or Switzerland where hundreds of monuments are built as a way to challenge people to understand how meaningful and beautiful they are. Another instance can be found on some streets in Vietnam where thousands of flowers are arranged intentionally in special occasions to make the streets become much more beautiful and brilliant.
Secondly, art can be used as a mean to help everyone get out of a dull, boring and uninteresting world. Obviously, art can make an interesting world in terms of entertainment, learning and showing ones personalities. For example, lots of researches show that by decorating photos or paintings which include green colour in the work place can help people get out of stress and pressure quickly. Also, different forms of art include dancing, music, literature, acting and drawing can help people a lot to broaden their awareness as well as express themselves. Or in other words, art plays a vital role in supporting people to get a better, easier and more interesting life.
As discussed, no one can deny the importance of art in people’s everyday life in terms of please people with a more beautiful and interesting world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, apart from, for example, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06918238994 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02784958449 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553459119497 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8773630226 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.142857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310752739611 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11072363056 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045553609554 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188649581685 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196425818613 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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