The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extend do you agree?
It is sometime argued that government should spend more money in dealing with the pathogen for citizen’s health instead of cure and remedy because of their great importance. In my opinion, I maintain the opinion that government funding should be equally divided between these two policies.
The main reason related to cost-effectiveness in controlling dangerous diseases and health problem. Encouraging people to have regular checkups as well as vaccinations for dangerous infectious sickness really avoids the expensive treatment costs in hospitals. For example, every year, the government regularly organizes vaccination sessions for infants to prevent dangerous diseases such as hepatitis A, Japanese encephalitis,...In this way, not only completely reduces the financial pressure on health care department and their parents, but also the risk of illness for them. Therefore, if people attach importance to disease prevention approach, their quality of life will be much better.
On the other hand, funding for treatment and medicine also plays an essential part in health policies. If the government does not invest in the best disease treatment for serious illness, the quality of life of the people will be affected leading to a reduced life expectancy. For instance, most people with weak immune systems easily get cancer or HIV that require the most advanced and intensive treatment regimens, the best drugs as well as chemotherapy to prolong life. So, the country is responsible for spending money in modern and advanced medical treatments to meet citizen’s demand for medication.
In conclusion, the government needs the effective health investment and reforms policies to balance therapy and preventive methods of pathogenesis in order to gain support from the public.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60147601476 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99713692622 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623616236162 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3884815056 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6363636364 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195126503103 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751891253012 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376796296235 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11481844816 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236060064669 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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