While licensed workers such as physicians, caretakers and tutors provide a significant insight to community, i believe that the massive tasks of athletes and other faces like celebrities, actors and so on to communities should not be undervalued. Both groups of experts ought to be rewarded with decent wages. This essay will support my opinion with relevant examples.
On the one hand, presumably, doctors and nurses are the paramount determinants of a healthy society. For illustration, the majority of cancer patients, critically injured victims and suffering individuals would have died prematu...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 301 350
No. of Characters: 1665 1500
No. of Different Words: 218 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.165 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.532 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.964 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 129 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.154 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.272 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.283 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.531 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.043 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ide a significant insight to community, i believe that the massive tasks of athle...
^
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...ls would have died prematurely if there hadnt been these healers, who are normally pu...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72333333333 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08238543988 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.723333333333 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.443061064 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.076923077 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829870385155 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0244510912455 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293256728336 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0428671739955 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365180588071 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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