colour is not something realistic, as recent researches cast doubt on them. We want to know the truth about our world most of the time. However, some of the facts in our minds are not changeable easily. Seeing pieces of stuff in a colourful mood is not a real thing as it is a game that humans brain plays to make the world around a more favourable place to live. Thus, instead of making colourful places, such as hospitals and offices, we can concentrate on new technologies to make our essential surroundings interesting to our brain.
The first and foremost reason for the businesses to make an active atmosphere in their place is to gain a better result after all. the easiest and perhaps the cheapest way to reach this goal is provided by colours. On the other hand, it seems that if effectiveness was a crucial part of that work, the company has made more effort in more creative ways.
Obviously, a wide range of employees prefers to have better facilities in their workplace rather than being in a place that is annoying because of different colours around. In another word, a coloured wall can not satisfy a person who spends most of his time in front of that. There are always other options to use as motivations.
arguably, hospitals are one of the most important places that people spend a lot of time on them! This means either that the mother of an average person delivers him/her in the hospital or that person will die at the same place. The importance of colours in a hospital could be seen as an absurd matter in this way of thinking.
There is no hesitation that each colour plays a crucial role to make a pure mood in every place, for instance, a hospital. But, neither the digital technologies simply helps us to change our vision of the same place, nor places like a hospital can be seen by people not only by the walls or colour but also by the memories someone has about that place.
In my opinion, there is not an acceptable connection between the efficiency in the workplace and the colour of the walls. Similarly, there is no fact about the links among the influence of a well-decorated room and the feelings of an ill person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Colour
colour is not something realistic, as recent r...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...e is to gain a better result after all. the easiest and perhaps the cheapest way to...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Arguably
...s other options to use as motivations. arguably, hospitals are one of the most importan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, similarly, so, thus, well, after all, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5501285347 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56484939693 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539845758355 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8970234027 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.117647059 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8823529412 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251443913799 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716310795419 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496044452475 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123095443995 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436505481451 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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