Public health is a major issue nowadays. Some people say the government should make laws to restrict fast foods and to change nutrition habits of people for healthier ones. Others argue that this is a totally personal issue and everyone should take care of it on their own. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people nowadays pay less attention to their health; they use fast-foods instead healthy foods as main meals. Although fast-foods can be a good way to save time, it has many side effects to the body too. To become healthier, I agree that government should have some action to restrict fast-foods, and each person must take their main responsibility in using food.
Fast-foods are the meals prepared and served quickly, most of them have too much calories and fat but less nutrients. If people often use fast-foods, they will get some troubles with their body such as obesity, heart diseases, high blood pressure, or high cholesterol. For example, eating too much sugar, they may get diabetes.
The first solution for above troubles is public health department could issue a regulation on fast-food and beverage, which request manufactures or restaurants show information of calories, nutrition, and side effects. This thing will help people consider if should use it or not. For example, the sugar information will stop using from people with diabetes. In addition, government should limit or even ban the advertisement of fast-foods. In fact, people could see many advertising that fast-food (hamburgers, pizzas) are a good choice for busy business people, but they did not inform to customers that these foods are potential damage to their body.
Therefore, the most important solution is the attitude of each person to fast-foods. Instead of eating fast-food, they could prepare by themselves, or order a healthier meal that has more vegetables and nutrients. Moreover, each person should check amount of salt, sugar, and fat which they eat; it enables them to control bad ingredients. The last thing is the appetite control, people should only eat when they feel crave, and eat enough amount for their activities.
In conclusion, fast-foods have bad impact on health and nutrition. Each person need to learn how to use food in right way, and government also should be in company with their inhabitants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...d served quickly, most of them have too much calories and fat but less nutrients. If...
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Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun nutrients is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...them have too much calories and fat but less nutrients. If people often use fast-foo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28418230563 0.247107183377 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.139410187668 0.155533422707 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0804289544236 0.0946595960268 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0428954423592 0.0501214627716 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0536193029491 0.0437548338989 123% => OK
Prepositions: 0.088471849866 0.122226691241 72% => OK
Participles: 0.0107238605898 0.0403226058552 27% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.7333629309 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.029490616622 0.0326793684256 90% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0563002680965 0.0861772015684 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0402144772118 0.021408717616 188% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0134048257373 0.011925033212 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2008.0 1933.35771543 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 316.048096192 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.15950920245 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355828220859 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245398773006 0.28420135186 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211656441718 0.203846283523 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153374233129 0.137316102897 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7333629309 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.037074148 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567484662577 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 61.9582548979 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1764705882 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.898187313 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.117647059 127.492653851 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 43.7163478888 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.625 1.69124875643 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400407078031 0.332605444948 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0851822926384 0.102741220458 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0582404610495 0.0668466124924 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.523151201978 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11441018716 0.148594505496 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142226720264 0.134430193775 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570566837324 0.0742795772207 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.250682364991 0.324371583561 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0550026491218 0.0638462369009 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241226185099 0.228012699653 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718737877611 0.058150111329 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.