Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Three factors making a nation become stable and wealthy are economy, society, and politics; and depending on country status, each government will set a different target. Some countries almost set their priority goal are economic growth rate, while other factors are kept the same value in others countries. This is reasonable and suitable if the former is developing countries and the latter is developed countries.
The most priority responsibility of developing countries government is pushing the economic expansion rate. By doing this task, they have enough money to develop infrastructure, which is the foundation to maintain the stability of economy. Moreover, demand of employment will increase to adapt the economic development; it enables to reduce the unemployment rate that is an indicator of economic health. For these reasons, the developing nations maintain their target on economic growth rate rather than other element of their tasks.
However, almost government of developed countries pays the attention to many tasks with an equal importance than only economic progress. Due to wealthy economy of the developed countries, the government has chance to perform other tasks such as public health programs, leisure activities, or human rights. Firstly, they can improve in living health by setting up some public health programs. An example of this is the Obama Care, which give many insurance benefits to American citizens. Secondly, they can enhance the spiritual life and/or human rights; these lead to people have more opportunities to give their opinions with their government. In the end, the government could consider changing the national policy that is better than for their country also for their inhabitants.
In conclusion, the mission statements of each government are difference, and this belongs to natural status of each countries. Then, I believe that the government is always seriousness in setting their mission for each period development.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.279411764706 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.138235294118 0.155533422707 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111764705882 0.0946595960268 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0352941176471 0.0501214627716 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0382352941176 0.0437548338989 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0941176470588 0.122226691241 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0352941176471 0.0403226058552 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81892623699 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0323529411765 0.0326793684256 99% => OK
Particles: 0.00294117647059 0.00163938923432 179% => OK
Determiners: 0.108823529412 0.0861772015684 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0147058823529 0.021408717616 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0117647058824 0.011925033212 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1973.0 1933.35771543 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 316.048096192 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.51155115512 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.452145214521 0.374742101984 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.349834983498 0.28420135186 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.254125412541 0.203846283523 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.174917491749 0.137316102897 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81892623699 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 59.8792550453 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3003293786 49.517814964 51% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.533333333 127.492653851 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 0.814263465372 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 55.1834983498 49.1944974215 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.93055555556 1.69124875643 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196143268946 0.332605444948 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140479053493 0.102741220458 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0644362153866 0.0668466124924 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.556484039097 0.534860350844 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119034472531 0.148594505496 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868416240102 0.134430193775 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349044691404 0.0742795772207 47% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.343267606916 0.324371583561 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0978752432328 0.0638462369009 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136163348828 0.228012699653 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162158179768 0.058150111329 28% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.