Nowadays, unfortunately, serious crimes like murder increased. Some people believe murderers deserve to be killed by the death penalty; however, others say that supporters of the death penalty do exactly what murder did and there is no difference between them. So taking prison is a better punishment for murders. I disagree with this statement and in this essay, I explain my reasons.
A number of people remark that punishment should reform bad behavior. As the death penalty is strict punishment for any kind of crime, even murder, so it does not change anything. It is better to be changed criminal behavior by living in prison. What is neglected about this statement is to pose a risk for other criminals by living near that murder because always there is a bit risk that changing behavior will not work out, so it is obvious that living in prison cannot be a good way to punishment.
The death penalty is the deterrent punishment, it means, whereas it seems strict punishment, it is a very good way to frighten people that see killing other people as just crime that I will not pay a heavy fine. Like other crimes, that how much they would be harsher, the punishment also will be heavier, the biggest crime that person can do is murdering and deserve the highest severe judgment. In addition, it is not fair enough for victims' families to see such a ridiculous verdict because they lost something that will not replace by anything. So it seems highly likely that they want to do something that the murderer did to his victim.
In conclusion, the judgments systems in countries are different from each other but I believe in absolute justice. In other words, I think judges should consider the pain that the victim's family suffers and then submit a verdict.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'victims'' or 'victim's'?
Suggestion: victims'; victim's
...udges should consider the pain that the victims family suffers and then submit a verdic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, whereas, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79016393443 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55171715005 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537704918033 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1006424759 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.357142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309157519531 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107330774105 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765595653702 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188359127329 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146103213511 0.056905535591 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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