Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.
Tourism has become a way of making money for the government and local people during the recent five decades. It is obvious domestic people rely on tourism as a livelihood but it has adverse effects on the environment, as well, such as increasing pollution in domestic areas.
Tourism is the important industry of some countries that they do not continue normal life without it, every year, numerous people from around the world go to these countries and spend money, such as Thailand, it is a beautiful country that is one of favorite place to travel and according to statistics, tourists spend 1 billion dollars in Thailand every year.
It is evident that there are not just pros in any kind of industry, and tourism can have a bad effect on the environment. Many people every year come to these countries and they produce a carbon footprint that pollutes the air, and also, they consume foods, water,… .The vast amount of air pollution in Thailand during the Covid-19 restriction 25% dropped as shows tourists could increase it again. In addition, tourists can endanger the routine life of a number of animals. It means, they go to visit animals and nature in the countryside that is habitants of animals, then tourists throw litter away in that areas, and if this litter was made by plastic, they would do damage to animals and nature. For example, plastic takes a long to demise from nature and it can be numerous obstacles for animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, for example, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80321285141 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53308935268 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582329317269 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.6608743019 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.5 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.125 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107199748751 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051822933881 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386196372692 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080679036178 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327749670251 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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