The quality of life in large cities is decreasing. What could be the reasons behind this? What measures can be taken to resolve this problem.
After having reached sustainably prosperous stages in human history due to the large-scale industrialization all over the world, recent years have witnessed the surprising decrease in the quality of human’s life, especially in many large cities. That have sparked much more never-ending debate about what the main cause is for the downward trend of the urban life’s quality. In this essay, the root causes of this issue and its appropriate solutions will be analyzed.
Admittedly, the health of people who are living mostly in large urbans is influenced heavily by the highly industrialized society. Particularly, metropolises always require their inhabitants to work intensively over eight hours per day to keep pace with the development of the world. So, the people who are living in the metropolitan areas have the tendency to bear more pressure that can lead to the deterioration of their health over time. What’s more, almost all large cities are the densely-populated ones where the pollution of air, water, food are rapidly rising that can alter their living environment. By that way, people of big cities will actually be faced with health-related fatal issues in the future.
Besides, the low quality of healthcare services can also contribute to the negative change in the urban life. The line of reasoning lies in the fact that almost all the authorities of big cities have strong interest in investing for economy that can reduce considerably a great deal of fund serving for healthcare services. Therefore, part of people in big cities can be treated in the poor conditions of the medical system. Working with the potential diseases in their body can decrease their productivity in the workplaces.
To overcome those above-mentioned issues, the authorities of big cities themselves have high responsibility for ensuring the balance between work and life of their inhabitants. In addition, imposing some regulations to limit the emissions of chemical factories and manufacturers can also make the living environment of their inhabitants better and more worth-living. The most important thing is to invest strongly into the medical system where their inhabitants can have the best care.
To sum up, the decrease in the quality of inhabitant’s life in big cities is an inevitable issue although those are places equipped with up-to-date necessities for having the most comfortable life. This issue can be resolved completely if the authorities of big cities pay attention to it seriously as soon as possible.
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| 2021-01-11 | Huy Do | 78 | view |
| 2020-10-22 | LE ANH HUY | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31670822943 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07384706318 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543640897756 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1269009903 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.411764706 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5882352941 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259968580142 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084023217065 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061035160803 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151325223871 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644922052623 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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