In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes which have occurred? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
The contemporary society has inevitably undergone a nonstop revolution, which has a profound impact on family structure and roles of family members. From my perspective, there are several noticeable changes occurring to the two elements, bringing about positivity in human lives.
The aforementioned alteration can be attributed to two primary aspects. First and foremost, that men are the only family breadwinners has become an obsolete conception. Compared to the past when the conventional upbringing of our ancestors forced females to stay at home and do household chores, modern women are allowed to embark on their career paths and earn money for families. Even in several European families, while wives participate in the workforce, their partners spend most of their time taking childcare responsibilities. Secondly, there has been a dramatic decline in traditional family structure. Instead of extended ones, numerous couples recently tend to live separately from their parents and build up nuclear families after marriages. Besides, single-parent families are also socially acceptable as people are becoming more receptive to changes and differences.
These changes undoubtedly make a great contribution to the development of the whole society. One worth-noting point is that they foster the independence of children. These days, parents are almost fully-occupied with heavy workloads on a frequent basis. When living in nuclear families without the help of grandparents, the offspring have to establish self-reliant lifestyles at early ages. For example, many Vietnamese children often learn how to ride bikes at the age of 5 to travel to schools on their own. Additionally, the alteration in family roles can boost mutual understanding in couples’ relationships. Changing the role for partners raises husbands' sympathy and awareness of the hardships women have to encounter while nurturing children and taking care of home, and vice versa.
In short, several significant changes are happening to family roles and structure. It seems that these changes play a positive and indispensable role in ameliorating the quality of life on a large scale.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the quality of life on a large scale.
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64220183486 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15787700081 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636085626911 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.226865382 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336937017005 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937463965958 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778608214531 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226293756232 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729243172807 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the quality of life on a large scale.
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64220183486 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15787700081 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636085626911 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.226865382 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336937017005 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937463965958 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778608214531 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226293756232 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729243172807 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.