In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
In these years, the way that family business works has changed. In the past, the one who makes money for family was the father. However now, more and more mother start earning money and letting their husbands to look after to their children. This essay will discuss changes in the family structure and its positive effects to the family.
First of all, it is undeniable that the role of women in the family has improved considerably over the years. In the past there were male dominant family models that never let women socialize and work since they were seen as an object that can only look after the children and cook dinner. However, with the movement of empowering women and support from both political and social groups, majority of women broke their chains and started earning money for their family. Therefore, the roles have changed, now men are cooking up the food and taking kids from the school.
In my opinion, the changes in the family model have brought positive effects to our lives. First, we have seen the success of the women in the work and social life since in the past there was a logic that thinks women are not capable of doing the jobs which were seen only men could do like instruction. Second, in those families, which has a working mother, ties have been strengthen since according to the research, conducted in UC Berkeley, support from husband to their working wives improve relationship between supposes and also family and children.
When all things are considered, it is clear that family models that is coming from the past has been changed and its good effects are undeniable in terms of empowering women and improving family ties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'strengthened'.
Suggestion: strengthened
...ch has a working mother, ties have been strengthen since according to the research, conduc...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wering women and improving family ties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, second, so, then, therefore, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8062283737 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2299044797 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3867167145 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218117164356 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10212666562 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880106069918 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151336006027 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615044253393 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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