In recent years, some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standarts of living in urban areas, but not in the countryside. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?
Although numerous countries have improved dramatically throughout recent years and reached the highest level of living in urban areas, countryside areas still remain unchanged and problematic. Therefore, this tendency causes many problems which are related to the full country. This essay will examine some of them and put forward various solutions.
One of the biggest difficulties which are associated with this situation is that the countryside areas play a great role in the industry of the whole country. What I mean by saying this, countryside areas have permanent importance for agricultural development and if it is not taken into account by the government, the industry can suffer from a lack of domestic production. As a result, it can lead to losing a big amount of money.
This situation can also cause overpopulation in urban areas. Due to the lack of improvement in countryside regions, there are not enough workplaces for local citizens so that they relocate to the urban areas in order to work and gain more money. Let us take Baku as an example, Baku contains one-third of the population of Azerbaijan and considered one of the most crowded cities in the world. This is because many and many more people came from other regions and settled in there in recent years.
In terms of solutions, the government should pay extra attention to agricultural development and rural areas. Creating new factories and opening more workplaces must be the main priority of the government because they are essential steps that can revive countryside areas.
Naturally, individuals who live in rural areas should also act responsibly to address these problems and prefer to live and work in their hometown instead of moving to urban areas and causing overpopulation.
To conclude, it obviously seems that the problems caused by lack of development in the countrysides are very serious but if the government and individuals share a collective responsibility, then it will be easier to offer some solutions and tackle difficulties.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, therefore, third, i mean, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20731707317 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97060755077 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557926829268 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8693488452 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318521176598 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949891467251 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057579411837 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144474301203 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735725341208 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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