Research are essential for developing new medicines and treatment to get better health and less disease.
Who individual, private companies or government should fund these researches
In this new era, every sector of life is evolving, while some still needs advancement. Needless to say,research is one of most imperative ways to promote healthy life and prevent numerous ailments. As for me,funding by private companies can be really beneficial rather than individuals and government.
Generally, government funding and controlling research can have several merits. To commence with, these scientific investigation require investment of immense capital, while private sectors can bare huge expenses. Consequently, it will ease pressure on nation and somehow the government money can be used for other developments such as infrastructure, crime security and education. To illustrate, developing countries will no longer depend on generosity of other nations for any research particularly in healthcare purpose. Straightforwardly, less affluent countries will have an effect on economical conditions. Hence, if private sections will fund researches, the country will remain financially safe and sound.
On the same hand, not only it will help financially but also can guarantee to extend a helping hand in responding other calamities such as phenomenal earthquake, seasonal droughts and etc . For instance, during any emergency, when law-makers will be out of power then private researchers will still be working and can continue the experiments to ease any epidemic disease specifically the worldwide crisis we are experiencing right now which is the spread of contagious "corona virus". What is more, private companies can omit possibility of delay in research due to funds shortage. Undeniably, only one demerit of this trend is that private organisation can be money-minded and launch any products with high market value towards the consumers. Assuming, if this disadvantage can be overcome, absolutely it will be boon for humankind.
To sum up,as I aforementioned the reasons above, I have a strong advocate that reliable and fast way of administering research will be only possible if private firms will support maybe government's role is to examine and monitor since it is undoubtedly a contentious issue that needs transparency and openness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, may, really, so, still, then, while, as for, for instance, such as, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65243902439 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27328669943 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643292682927 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6216602867 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.6 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206960986934 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782708133424 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549329438028 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129918165769 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393700161402 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.