Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison would commit crimes when set free? What are the reasons? What can be done to solve the problem?
It is undoubted that many criminals who are imprisoned would offend after being released back into society. There are several reasons for this and some reasonable measures can solve this problem.
In my opinion, two main factors are to blame for the fact that the majority of ex-prisoners commit crimes after they are released. First, some methods of punishment in prison are unsuitable. In some jails, for instance, prisoners are punished violently if they break the rules. Consequently, they are not only unaware of the consequence of the crimes that they committed but also even become more extremely. Second, some prisoners are likely to be affected negatively from their roommates. Some recent research has shown that 80 percent of ex-prisoners tend to commit crimes more severely after being set free if they are imprisoned in the same places with dangerous criminals.
Nevertheless, the trend of relapsing into crime of ex-prisoners can be curbed by some reasonable measures. The first one is that police should classify offenders into groups based on criminal records to apply suitable punishment methods for each group. For example, dangerous criminals such as brutal killers should be isolated from others and punished strictly, and first-time offenders should be imprisoned in less strict environment and they should be more educated rather than punished. Furthermore, the methods of punishment should be changed to be more humane. Many psychologists say that education rather violence is an effective way to help prisoners to realize their past guilty activities.
In conclusion, the unsuitable punishment methods in prison and the effects from other criminals are the root causes of ex-prisoners’ offence. However, classification criminals before sending them to jail and the change of punishment methods should tackle this problem
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48601398601 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91427431232 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573426573427 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4505218067 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239984260788 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872679596193 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506454840077 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152973867681 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474850533572 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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