Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes when set free. What are the reasons? What can be done to solve the problem?
Many countries in the world currently have to deal with the problem that prisoners continue breaking the regulations after being free from prison. There are some compelling reasons for this phenomenon, and this essay also points out some common measures to solve this.
To begin with, there are some underlying reasons why prisoners often commit crimes again. Firstly, because of living in a toxic environment where has many hardened criminals, these individuals are easily affected negatively by other prisoners’ habits and thoughts. As a result, after being free, these citizens might become even more brutal than before. Secondly, as changing a person’s inherent traits is not easy, the officials find it difficult to reconstruct a prisoner’ original and wrong mindset. Consequently, committing offenses again is an inevitable circumstance.
On the other hand, some possible solutions are included in this essay in order to mitigate this severe problem. The first measure is that bringing the commonly educational program to these offenders is a great way to change their understanding. This helps to fix and reinforce again these people’s awareness of love, humanitarian values and especially social responsibility. Furthermore, creating a job opportunity for prisoners when getting free is likely to impact those citizens’ daily lives. In others word, many offenders nowadays find it arduous to apply to any company when they are on a black list. Therefore, being gentle and sympathetic with these people also support them to convert into a good citizen.
In conclusion, it is difficult for many nations to minimize the reoffending of a prisoner, however, I believe that finding out the importance of education and environment, and solving problems by some mentioned methods above could help these countries tackle this phenomenon.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54225352113 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95684090765 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658450704225 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0764696996 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146551504869 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517299892415 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447955630764 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924049287076 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380981846252 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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