Safety standards are important when building people’s home. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building code - the government or the people who build the homes?
With the increasing in population, it becomes mandatory to build more houses for the people. It is also very necessary that the house which is building must have safety standards to protect the citizens from any natural or man made calamities. In my opinion, the government play important role to compel people to follow strict building rules.
To start with the responsibilities of government to take care of their citizens, government should make some strict rules for building home anywhere in the nation. People must obey that rules while building homes otherwise there will be a punishment for the same. Such rules can be of having fire extinguisher in every building, least open space between two homes or apartments and the building plans must be approved by the government. So by this way people enforced to follow safety rules while building home or Complex.
However, it is not the only government who is responsible, but people should also take in to account these safety measurements because at the end they are living in home. Then why they are not considering this when building home? The reason is that today due to the increase in population, people prefer to live in apartment as a shortage of land and with affordable prices. So for earning more money in short period of time, builders not following safety standards while building it because it increases the cost of home. Hence government has to come into picture to protect people from calamities by imposing strict rules for safety.
At the end, I would say that with the development in technology, people uses more electrical tools and machines, results into higher chances of shock circuits and fire. Therefore it is compulsory to have safety standards in every home.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , the least
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ces. So for earning more money in short period of time, builders not following safety standard...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... because it increases the cost of home. Hence government has to come into picture to ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, then, therefore, while, as to, in short, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99657534247 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68712125899 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551369863014 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8516934204 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.52324322631 0.244688304435 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18077779912 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810083466284 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293700430794 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116364274601 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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