Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
In this 21st century, the lifestyle of people has become more faster which in turn lead them to explore more options to prepare food easily and in less time. It is very much true that making food easier has increased the standard of living of the people in many ways which I will discuss in next paragraphs.
If we throw a light in past then we could see that people used to prepare food traditionally hand-made and with physical hard work but today we use electronic equipment and machine such as mixer grinder, microwave, oven and electronic gas store which result in faster process with less physical exercise and in short period of time, hence people can use their valuable time in other useful activities. Another improvement is, today people uses more ready to cook food packets to save time which also helpful in the growth of the food industries resulting in to increase the economy of the nation. To exemplify, as per one survey of times of India, today more than 40% of the people consumes Maggi to satisfy their hunger instantly as Maggi prepares in 2 minutes.
What is more, the question is, why people do not have much time to prepare food and why they want to save time? The main reason is, now people are more working and the working hours are increasing to earn more money. Now, to survive in this cut throat competition and to meet the higher cost of living, it will become compulsory for both the parent to earn money. Therefore mother has not much time to prepare food traditionally which requires more time and eventually they follow the modern and fast method to prepare food. For instance, today in every office, bank and industries, the number of working women increases day by day. Further more government of India has also reserved 33% of government job for women so we could say that preparing food easier is blessings for working women.
All in all, with change in lifestyle and standard of living, preparing food easily is part of today’s people’s life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...ury, the lifestyle of people has become more faster which in turn lead them to explore more...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ith less physical exercise and in short period of time, hence people can use their valuable ti...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...sory for both the parent to earn money. Therefore mother has not much time to prepare foo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, in short, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7335243553 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43035350767 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541547277937 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7343218099 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0833333333 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214467199717 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086156632695 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595821389023 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148646987692 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685068605063 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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