Many countries thought that children has to do homework in there free time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Most countries in the world believe that, homework should be done at home by the children. I think, I am largely disagreeing with the statement. My inclination is justified in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, relying on the fact that children are the blank slat, where what we write, makes their future, so if we putting them into pressure to do academic curriculum all the time, results into restricting their growth. They should give free time to think beyond school syllabus for growing their thinking horizon, which in turn lead them to invent something new in front of the world. To cite an example, there are many mathematicians and scientists such as sir Isaac Newton and Albert Einstein found great inventions in mathematics and science though they removed from the school. So homework is not the only thing which will make children more educated and knowledgable.
Furthermore if the free time of children utilised in homework then they would not have time to play physical activities such as sports and playing with their friends, because physical activities are also as important as academic learning for the overall development of teenagers. As they passing throw many physical and mental changes during their teen age.
However we should not neglecting the fact that if we repeat any work then it will be remembered for a longer time, so as in the case of homework also, if children do some homework at home then they will revise the studies which will be useful to clear the exam easily. Further academic knowledge is then vital thing for getting good job. But homework should be limited and will not use the free time of the students.
To conclude, I would say that home work is important for the better future of the children but not at the cost of taking children’s free time for doing homework only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, then, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90996784566 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59220630035 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559485530547 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.9676006144 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.461538462 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270668342685 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901070886702 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663411584478 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157208705105 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445158394019 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.