School children are using computers in school more than ever.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion.
Since the invention of computers the latters have become an essential part of human life including school children. In the 21st century working on a computer involves completing homework and searching for information, therefore students use them more and more every day. Although I agree that using informational technologies demonstrates special advantages, I think that the trend to exaggerate the total integrity with the Internet resources implicits significant disadvantages.
On the one hand, implementation of distance learning and other forms of computer training significantly saves student’s time and money. Thanks to the introduction of the computer it is also possible to study at the best international schools without leaving home. For example, at the Skyeng, which has 1,700 students and more than 11,000 teachers, any Russian school child have possibility to study English and mathematics online. Hence, the computer and the Internet allow to get a quality education without spending time and money on the path of the student to the teacher and Vice versa.
On the other hand, constant work with the computer has irreversible consequences for the physical condition of the student. Reading beyond measure, unlimited time sitting in front of the computer require serious strain on young eyes, spine and joints. For instance, normally, a person blinks about 20-25 times a minute, and when working at a computer, the frequency of blinking decreases to 1-2 times a minute, which leads to drying out of the eye mucosa. Doctors also recorded tunnel syndrome - pain in the hand due to constant pinching of the nerve in the carpal tunnel when using a computer mouse. In conclusion, the bad news are that professional diseases of programmers today affect the young body of schoolchildren.
Based on the arguments given above, the use of computers in the lives of schoolchildren has it’s advantages and disadvantages. However, the negative consequences of constantly working online can irreversibly change the health of the student, which devalues all the positive aspects of this process.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since the invention of computers the latters ...
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Line 2, column 474, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
...ce, the computer and the Internet allow to get a quality education without spending ti...
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Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: IT_IS[22]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?
Suggestion: its
...ters in the lives of schoolchildren has it’s advantages and disadvantages. However, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41463414634 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02924709896 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8646560234 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.857142857 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186277400628 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620543671569 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049112035236 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112369310601 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452558345776 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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