Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well as home. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely acknowledged that schools are no longer crucial as offspring are able to learn through the huge amount of information on the internet, they can also learn by themself at home. From my perspective, while learning through the Internet can be advantageous, the benefits of studying at home should be taken into consideration.
On the one hand, there are several merits of gaining plenty of information through the internet, the most significant of which are gathering updated information and preparing assignments. With regard to the former, children can collect a thousand websites that will appear on a single topic and enlarge the topic. For example, DOGO News is a web for kids can research any kind of topic they want, besides that this is an appropriate age site for children. In terms of the latter, there are various reliable sources of studying that children can access. For instance, Duolingo is a useful application where children can do homework and prepare assignments very quickly.
On the other hand, learning by themself at home would be beneficial for reasons, linked to flexible time and cost-effectiveness. When it comes to the first idea, children can not be pressured to choose what time they want to study. For instance, children are not compulsory to wake up early to go to school instead of choosing to learn at midday or tonight. As far as the second point is concerned, parents will cut down the burden of tuition fees for their children. for example, the parents will spend a huge of tuition fees every single year on their offspring, which makes parents feel on the breadline.
In conclusion, I am inclined to believe that despite the positive effects that searching for information on the Internet, the advantages of studying at home as well as school should not be underestimated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...den of tuition fees for their children. for example, the parents will spend a huge ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90253019575 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550819672131 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0380809506 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.307692308 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271091550065 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1005811548 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655084620925 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17260181124 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614527691447 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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