Over the last two centuries scientists have been analyzing influence of differnet activities on our body. As a result, there is a great number of actions and habits which could deteriorate our health. Nevertheless, a great deal of individuals do not take it into consideration and continue to do these activities. This essay will discuss major causes of that development and what we can do in order to change it.
The main reason why people are reluctant to changes of their lifestyle and habits is connected with the fact that overwhelming majority of that negative activities provides mental or physical satisfaction. As a result, people become addicted to consumption of particular products or to some actions. For example, smoking is obviously negative habit which is connected with high expenditures and negative influence on the health of smokers. However, many of people knowing this, continue to smoke every day, thus, extreame measures should be taken. If the government banned smoking the number of smokers would fall dramatically.
The inability either to leave negative habit or to stop doing something what is detrimental for your health is caused by lack of strong will or motivation. For example, recent research has revealed that people who eat fast food and suffer from obesity fully understand that if they did not stop doing it they could die, nevertheless they still do it. In order to help those people doctors should help them to controll what they eat.
In conclusion, bad habits are hard to leave because of addiction and weak character, therefore the government should help people who suffer from it by limiting consumption of negative products or providing medical assistance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18115942029 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85074710983 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7748665076 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258876037482 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829552734005 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458917804004 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140271741741 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774121816872 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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