Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Whether scientific research investigates through governments or private institutions are a controversial issue. Personally, I, completely, agree that both authorities of governments and private companies should propel the research of science.
First and foremost, it is true that if governments take care all the ins and outs of the investigation of the world of science, the human being will be benefited in many ways. Firstly, if governments conduct medical science to develop the best vaccines against potential epidemics, the fatal diseases would reduce. Secondly, investigation of renewable energy is necessary to control by the authority, because conducting scientific investigation through the administration of a country would think as more reliable and ethical, compared to private institution. For example, studies have shown that governments who consider as trustworthy officials, are investigating on solar power for avoiding criminals who might spread corruption which enhances social anarchy.
On the contrary, private organizations have some qualities to take scientific research a bit further. For instance, the great innovation of the iPhone by Apple, an US based institution, who changed the scenario of communication and made it possible to bring smart phone at the hand of common people. The other advantage of scientific research through profit-based companies is that they would intend to create better products and also make a competitive market. The society, therefore, will get privilege of new and a better product and services.
In conclusion, although the officials of the whole world have the responsibility to investigate the scientific investigation, in my opinion, it is a good idea to give the chance to private companies to invest their money on scientific discoveries
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73333333333 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29758609805 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8948746912 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.727272727 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223661860385 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869342173345 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706816413189 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142124794111 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805523215341 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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