Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Scientific research plays an important role in human’s development. Some people think that the responsibility for conducting and managing it should be taken by governments, and not by private companies. Personally, I believe that both governments and businesses should have the right and duty to do research.
Governments have to take the leading role in doing research because of a few reasons. Firstly, scientific research is the key to finding solutions to the pressing concerns of society. Thorough medical research, for example, needs to be conducted by governments to develop vaccines against potential epidemics. Research into renewable energies is also crucial to try to deal with global warming. These kinds of extensive research require the participation of hundreds or even thousands of researchers and the application of advanced technology, which can only funded and monitored by the government. In addition, scientific studies controlled by the authorities will ensure reliable and ethical methods, and minimize the risk of these studies being used for criminal activities. Studies related to nuclear power or weapons, for example, must be carried out or supervised by governmental organizations to prevent high-tech crimes and to protect the country’s security.
However, scientific research should not only be conducted by governments. Private companies can do research which is not carried out by governments, and in fact, many useful scientific discoveries have been made by private institutions. For example, the invention of the iphone by Apple, a corporation in the US that has opened the era of smartphones and facilitated interaction among people all over the world. Furthermore, encouraging profit-driven companies to conduct scientific investigations will help them develop their own products and create competition in the market. Society, therefore, will benefit from new inventions and lower priced products.
In conclusion, although governments should control and carry out major scientific studies, private companies should not be deprived of the right to do research.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74440894569 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20889262918 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578274760383 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5704761445 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397044966454 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131386653448 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12290135152 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300621579802 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124938912819 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.