Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals claim that scientific research should be conducted by governments instead of private corporations. While it is true that the authorities should be responsible for carrying out research, I would argue that these activities should also be done by companies.
To begin with, the main benefit of governments taking care of scientific research is that the quality of these studies is scrupulously tested, and these researches will be used to benefit society as a whole. Unlike companies, analyses by governments are carried out in a strict process and tested many times before these results are officially applied; therefore, it is rare to see that these researches can do harm to users. Besides, as the primary purpose of the authorities’ investigations is to enhance the quality of citizens’ life instead of focusing on maximization profits like private corporations, so, residents might be directly benefited from the results. For example, many environmental studies carried out by governments will reduce the effects of global warming, and people; thereby, will be undoubtedly benefited from these activities.
However, I believe that the authorities should share responsibility with private companies for some reasons. The first reason is that this could help to lessen the governments’ pressure on the budget. Resultantly, residents would have to pay lower taxes, and the authorities would also have more cash into more productive purposes, such as the development of infrastructure, industries, hospitals, etc. Another reason is that since the aim of corporations is yielding high profits, they will conduct the research quickly and efficiently. For instance, as COVID-19 is spreading out in many counties, many private companies’ studies about this virus have been urgently conducted, and the results of these researches have helped reduce the spreading speed in some countries.
In conclusion, I believe that both governments and private companies should be involved in research activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61111111111 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17359299713 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539215686275 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.887431576 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.083333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30941313271 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128957332737 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916947041146 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23640872552 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863252137895 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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