Some say that news has no connection with most people’s life and it is waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?
With the booming of internet and technological devices, is irrefutably true that our current lives are filled with a huge amount of information and news. While there are many people condemn that these news has no relation with our life and causes time loss when reading them, I, myself, tend to be disagree with this argument.
Since the law about internet security have not been enacted in many countries, it seems that public are bombarded with news which is fiddling, unchecked and maybe distorted. Taking advantage of the curious nature of humans, many journalists are using shocking tittles and thumbnails to entice more views and readers and thus, gaining profound profits from these readers. As people are easily swayed by strong verbs and shocking words, they may click into these link and read these news without knowing that this news are maybe faked and sometimes are created with a view to advertising for particular products which will cause a feeling of anger and annoyance. And of course, it is totally a waste of time to bury one’s head in to these news.
Nevertheless, I am much more agreed by the fact that we couldn’t live without news. Provided information, citizens can understand the policies of the country clearly and therefore can behave more appropriately. In addition, people who are being connected with the news can have great opportunity to broaden their knowledges in various features of their lives. Besides, when living in world when tons of head-aching matters surrounded, reading news are extremely important. For instances, as Covid-19, which is formerly known as Corona virus had spread out in many countries these days. If people are not updated about this disease and how to prevent them, it is undoubtedly that millions of people in the world would suffer from this and maybe lead to catastrophe disaster.
In conclusion, while accepting that news sometimes annoy us a lot, I totally believe that reading them will bring many benefits to humans and it is not a waste of time to read them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...hile there are many people condemn that these news has no relation with our life and cause...
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Line 2, column 475, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...they may click into these link and read these news without knowing that this news are mayb...
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Line 2, column 731, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
... waste of time to bury one’s head in to these news. Nevertheless, I am much more agreed b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59960736988 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0788182493 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.769230769 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263704251913 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928287799454 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653985007725 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168487827577 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034462110758 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.