Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree?
Juvenile delinquencies are irrefutably on the rise. While some people argue that the crime-commited youngsters should serve penalties like adults, others tend to oppose this idea. I, to some extent, favour with the latter.
On the one hand, it is undoubted that treating youngsters same like the aldults who commit crimes will act as a deterrent to many crimes and all the dangerous crime should be solved by heavy punishment no matter what who convicts. Moreover, when the young wrongdoers receive lenient sentences as compared to adults-offenders, they might not acknowledge the adverse consequences of their unlawful behaviours and thus maybe re-offend and thereby put the life of many innocent citizens in jeopardy and pose a threat to the society as a whole.
On the other hand, I am far more convinced that juvenile criminals are treated in a different way compared to mature ones.The young are not sufficiently educated or sometimes lack of childrearing or parental guides which means that it is unjustified for them to serve harsh penalties as adults. Futhermore, I always believe that purpose of any law-makers are to educate the criminals, not to punish them. So why don’t we use more proper ways to re-educate them like doing unpaid community services instead of putting them in sentences? Besides, forcing youngsters to serve punishment too early means we are dimnishing opportunities in their career path and this, evenly, will ruin their life in the future.
In conclusion, while accepting that treating young wrongders same like matures one will reduce the crimminals, I belive that there are many proper ways for the government to do with the juvenile deliquencies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22426470588 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93443851361 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.6381766127 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.1 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233863592275 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743883885596 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778446162609 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13190090099 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567376937296 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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