scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, it is believed by scientists that eating fast food is harmful for health.Some proportion of masses recken that literate people can solve this in an effective way. By contrast, others have conflicting views. Here, I would like to account both the view points.
Manifold points are there to support the former view. First and foremost, knowledgeable people can get more about the effects of eating processed food through internet and spread this by using social networking site. Therefore, educated people can not only aware others but also prevent people's health from the bad effects of packaged food. Moreover, well educated people can check the ingredients which are used in convenience food and do complain if find any problem regarding food.As a result, educated people are fruitful to stimulate masses about the hazard of canned food. On the other side, opposite wind is also there.
To begin with, unlike illiterate, scooled people are giving more preference to the junk food rather than stopping.To be specific, working people have no time for preparing domestic food and they like to purchase or eat food from outside which are harmful. Thence, the idea of stopping fast food through educated people does not fully holds the water.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, folks can satisfy their taste of food by eating food outside.However, still I believe that it is imperative to some appropriate step about the excessive eating of junk food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, well, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24489795918 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65775409127 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644897959184 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6977241956 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.083333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383781120567 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122894203677 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815163412822 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221244361234 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406514913393 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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