Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change.
Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of
individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage.
What are your views?
Thesedays, environmental protection is a remarkable affair in a contemporary society. Some people state that one of the devastating consequences of this problem is climate changes that is not contemplated to tackle by governments. Instead, the citizens should take responsibility for this issue to recuperate their environment state. Personally, i am of the opinion that both government and residents should cooperate to prevent erratic condition of climate in terms of ethical values and social advancement.
On the one hand, there are two principal purposes reasons why citizens should join hand to address the atmosphere polluted conditions. First of all, inhabitants do not only play a profound proportion in population, but also their lifestyle is influenced directly by environment and climate in their whereabouts. Therefore, they should take a part of responsibility in this affair. Furthermore, an exemplary citizen is a person who can conscious individually the debilitating of climate via mass media or direct awareness that the climate is shifting eccentrically, and then take something seriously to protect the standard of living. A macroscale issue like climate change that will be negotiated utterly if a large force of people unanimously carry out environmental protection campaigns properly; and now it starts with the voluntary of each individual.
Beside the endeavour of residents, the government also should engage to contribute and support in terms of policy and finance. For instance, they should elicit information via environment surveys, go to directly resident quarter to investigate how serious of environmental pollution which is considered the crucial element lead to global warming. After that, based on the result, they can issue a multitude regulations related to prevent global warming. Moreover, government and ministries should pay more finance for the environmental affair. If the financial security is already fulfill, they can build more waste processed factory, recycle plant or they also can manufacture a handful of environmentally friendly produces. When a country can control their amount of waste and reuse it effectively in the lifestyle, that will be a marvelous feat of this nation. Furthermore, the number of tourists per year will rocket because no one denies to visit a such clean country.
In conclusion, because environmental issue is a globally problem, since each individual should take responsibility in this affair to act effectively in environmental protection campaigns. Both residents and government play a paramount importance to prevent global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2254.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72081218274 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28428749629 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560913705584 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2535367106 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.222222222 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169218364367 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549852195267 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382307288448 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116276996432 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316118077876 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.