Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Scientists demonstrate that modern technology will become more genius than human beings, some individuals believe it is strength while other people find it is weakness development. From my point of view, this notion have both benefits and drawbacks with each person and each field. The following essay will analyse this essay in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with the appearence of new innovation that the requirement of populations has increased gradually, so modern technology such as computers is hugely significant for the people life. Not only will it provide more opportunities to explore the galaxy space though satellites or telescopes, which improve their mentality life, but also the creative and imagination abilities of adolesence will be advanced, which rise their economic background. Furthermore, munerous occupation can be created such as I.T or online staff, reducing the propotion of unemployment and homeless people in their country. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Justen Pob, the famous interviewer and professor who is expert about the sucess of european countries where technology is really develop. The statistic showed that nearly every nations has got plenty of acheviement.
On the other hand, we can not negate the demerits of this phenomon for the society. If postgraduates depend too much on computer, they will lack their independent abilitiy which lose their original talent. Moreover, many govenments take advantage from technology's investment for their own revenue, various harmful influence will be led by this action to the young generations.
To conclude, though by agrument from the essay, this essay have its own helpful possitive and negative aspect appropriate with each person, so the state need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the nation's development.
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...plans to improve their citizens for the nations development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, while, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89455587511 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65034965035 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4814058515 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206170125341 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684276479596 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087045291239 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119382906936 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875602584636 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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