Should the authorities from big cities around the world discourage citizens from using private cars and rather encourage them to use other means of transport such as bicycles, skates, the subway, etc.?
Nowadays every family who is live in the urban city all have a car. Transport need is very important in a humane society, however, too many a personal vehicle is actually causing city congestion and environment problem. Many people think should stop a personal car driving into the centre area, the government should develop public transport to solve the problem. In this essay, I will point out my opinion to make a conclusion.
To begin with, every city all have a problem with traffic. People are faced with traffic problem all the time, however, personal transportation always is a good choice for who need to work in the early morning. For instance, some city is not that convenient for public transportation it will force people to drive themselves rather waiting for bus or train.
Therefore, private cars it astutely causes many problems, for example, air pollution, limitation parking area cause congestion and so on. In my point, every taxpayer should demand their government implement special programmes to discourage people from using private cars to the busy centre area, such as on-time city bus, peak-hour bus ticket discount or increase city parking price to stop people driving personal cars to the city.
To sum up, taking public transportation or encourage people to use other means of transport such as bicycles or skates will be a good choice for every citizen. It can help decrease CO2 emissions and prevent city congestion problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67192190505 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7175682204 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.272727273 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210286106622 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742216402916 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687437550214 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136318438955 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059864582683 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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