should children learn all subject?
In a threshold of the new era, a burgeoning number of people are concerned about their children education. In this regard, whether should the students have to learn all subjects as compulsory is a controversial issue. While many people believe that having a wide range of knowledge is vital, I, however, stand for the opposite idea.
It is irrefutable that, if students are forced to study every subject, they would be under a lot of pressure constantly. As a result, children could easily suffer from diseases such as depression or autism, causing detrimental effects to the society. To illustrate, in Asian countries, especially Japan, the commit suicide rate of teenagers is extremely high with hundreds of death each year due to the pressure from the school curriculum. Furthermore, because of these pressure, students are able to become workaholic and could not be roundly growth as the lack of out-door activities and soft skills.
More to the point, children would lose their interest in education as they feel that Math, for instance, is very time consuming if they want to be the artist or athlete in the future. Not to mention that subjects are related to each other in some way or the other. Accordingly, students only have to learn some core subjects and could be freely selecting their favors. The most essential factor at school is the holistic development of student, which depends on the educational platform as well as the foundation of that school but not only the amount of absorbed knowledge.
In conclusion, this essay advocate the idea that there should be freedom in choosing some subjects. By doing so, children might be developed as the way they want and minimize the problem as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean ''?
... advocate the idea that there should be freedom in choosing some subjects. By doing so,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9756097561 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71286522477 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7980661996 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231328386503 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755087303116 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933663574226 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134523589157 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073937574111 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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