Medical studies shown that smoking is injurious for health beause it is the one of the most common fector that cauring lungs infections and lung cancer.I think that smoking should be banned in public places because it effect the health of other people who are surrounding smoker.
To embark on ,i totally agree that smoking should be prohibited in public places .Firstly on crowded places there are alots of people like pregnant women and other person who are suffering from respiratory problems are able to get infection due to smoking and it easily effect to children and old age people because they are having weak immune system. Secondly in public places there are number of turests who come in our country to know about our culture and traditions and it put bad impact on the guest when the see the people who smoked and effect our cultural values as well as economic status .Thirdly smoking should be banned in patrol pumps and public transport because at that place there are easily get fire due to use of fuel that is fire friendly .
Moreover smoking should be prohibited in schools,colleges,hospitals,community office ,because at that places people mostly visit in their daily life .I think government should check the shopes catch the saler who sale the shoking substance and stop the farms which producing that kind of substance and that step should defiantly reduce the smoking .
To conclude that smoking is deadly for our health and also cause air pollution which effect others so smoking should be prohibited specially in public places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, i think, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97692307692 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94488343433 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.8673395419 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 258.8 106.682146367 243% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.0 20.7667163134 250% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.6 7.06120827912 306% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29179778041 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182555969119 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332482171444 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198115013959 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308376270458 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.0 13.0946893788 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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